WALT: reorganize info to gain an understanding of the text
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teachers are Miss Bunting, Mrs Lee and Miss Ferguson. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, they will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, March 10, 2021
Reading work W6 T1 (not finished)
hi guys this is my reading work i couldnt finish but atleast i tried. Also this planet is not real its just our create task
hope you like it!
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hey hope i love your first blog post i can tell you have worked very well maybe next time you can come o me for help on your create task but you did an amazing job well done.From Mya
ReplyDeletethanks for your comment mya, also thanks fir the help on posting it hope to see more comments of positevity idk if i spelt it right but thanks for your comment
Deleteyou did a great job hope but you need to add more things there but other then that you did a great job
ReplyDeletethanks i did get kinda confused on what to do for my reading task but i tried my best :D
Deleteomg hope but it was good
ReplyDeletethanks for your comment i did get confused on what to do
Deletehi Hope i like your name:):) but next time you try do more work :)
ReplyDeletethanks for your comment also mya helped me choose the name, ill try better next time.
ReplyDeleteHi Hope, I like you planet name. Is there anything in particular you are struggling with when doing your create task? If so please see a blogger expert or come and speak to your teacher. I look forward to seeing a finished blog post.
ReplyDeleteMiss Ferguson
thanks mrs ferguson ill try better next time,ill ask for help so i can do a little better next time.
Deletehi hope its me Chelsea! i like how you made your thing to be but dont you think its a bit original ? you might want to make your thing more interesting . but i like how you have made a name like that Sivoris sorry if i spelt dont wrong and your buggys name wrong or your name without a capital letter . bye
ReplyDeletehi hope i acidentily deleted the last one so im just going to say this i really like how you made your things name its very creative but i think its a little to ordanary sorry if i spelt some stuff wrong
ReplyDeletebye